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Twilight Sparkle vs Spacetwilight Sparkle part 2

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Descent of the God of Destruction
Five months have passed since the Rocket's launch. As well Twilight's night terror. Since then Twilight Sparkle has put that night behind her. She is now writing a letter to Princess Celestia Detailing about her recent discovery of the Magic of Friendship. Elsewhere in Ponyville, Twilight's Friends are discussing the recent Meteor showers that have been streaking across the Night Skies.
"I thought there weren't supposed to be any meteor showers for another 3 years?" Stated Rarity, usually not much into astrometry but to her the meteor shower was worth her attention due to its awesome beauty, much like herself.
"Twilight recently got a letter from Princess Luna about the event. She was quite perplexed as well. And I'm quite sure that's something to be worried about." Stated Fluttershy although quite timidly.
"You always worry about every little thing, Fluttershy. I say it's no big deal!" Rainbow Dash replied. She was tired of talking about something that to her was just a bunch of space rocks zooming past the earth. "Besides. It's not like an asteroid or space aliens are going to come here and blow everything up!"
Fluttershy gave out a squeak as she darted behind Rarity as Rainbow Dash raised her voice at the end of her statement. She shook at such a thought. Rarity gave the rainbow maned Pegasus a hard look. Dash giggled a bit, walked over and reassured her fellow Pegasus.
"Look, I'm sure it's no big deal. Let's just head over to Twilight's and see what she's up to."
"I thought she's writing another Friendship Report to Princess Celestia?" Rarity asked she had not seen her fellow unicorn since earlier that morning. Before she went over to High Teck's to discuss something. The visit must have been short since she come running back to her library in a rush. Eyes wide open, cheeks blushing redder then Applejack's apples and smile across her face.
"Well she should be done with that by now." Rainbow said. "Hey, tell you guy what, I'll head over to her farm and bring Applejack over with me. We'll meet at the new unveiling of one of High Teck's new inventions."

"Okay, Darling we'll see you there." Rarity said as she and Fluttershy wave as Rainbow Dash shot off at Mach 5 towards Sweet Apple Anchors.

Rarity and Fluttershy walked over to Twilight's Library and knocked on the door a moment later Twilight answered the door and smiled at them.

"Hey girls! How are you today?" asked Twilight levitating a cup of tea.
"Wonderful Darling, We came over to see if you wanted to come over with us to see what High Teck built this time?" Rarity replied. Not all that interested in High Teck's creations. Although she didn't mind his good looks. Oh, no she didn't mind that at all.

"Oh I hope it's not as scary as that Robo-Pony he built last time. Poor Bon-Bon is still recovering from thoughs laser burns near her.... unmentionables." Fluttershy's cheeks went red recalling how she had to assist Nurse Redheart with holding an ice pack between Bon Bon's haunches over the laser burns.
"Poor Bon-Bon.... Well. I kind of have to agree with High Teck, on the note that Machinery and Electrical storms are not good bed fellows." Twilight stated putting her hoof on her chin.

"Which reminds me, why were you running back to here blushing like that?" Rarity asked. She suddenly put on a sly smile. "Did 'something' happen between you two?" Fluttershy couldn't help herself from giggling for a moment.

"What!? NO! Nothing like that!" Twilight responded in a defensive manner. "I-I mean. He's sweet and all and we're close but.... he's more like a big brother to me. And...."

"So why where you blushing like that?" Fluttershy asked.

"Well.... let's just say, if you ever go to High Teck's place and you see he has company over, particularly of the Mare variety... well.... I recommend knocking before you enter his bedroom." Twilight said with a hot blush from her cheeks. Although it was evident she couldn't prevent herself from smiling.

"Oh my.... were they..... You know, kissing?" Fluttershy blushed as she asked.
"Yeah... they were. What you would call.... making out" Twilight said blushing even redder. The girls thought her cheeks were about to melt off.
"Goodness! Who was it?" Rarity asked in complete shock. It also sounded a bit of jealousy in her voice. It was not surprising though, all the girls had a bit of a crush on the Stallion. Even Twilight, although she'd never reveal that.

"Um... well you see I can't quite say who it was. They both asked me not to tell anyone. And... Well I think we can all agree if we all make a promise to a friend we should keep it. Besides. He said they both plan to tell us as soon as they feel the time is right." Twilight said. Her cheeks going back to their lavender color.
"And the friendship Report?" Fluttershy asked.

"To always knock before you barge in on your friends. Because they could be doing something that you don't need to see or doing something very personal, and being their friend you should always respect their privacy." Twilight recalled.
The girls nodded and spent a bit of their time drinking some tea and thinking about who High Teck could be dating. Twilight none the less kept her friend's secrete and refused to tell. As much as she would like to. She just couldn't betray his trust.
"Well girls, should we be off to the big reveal now?" Rarity asked and all three girls nodded.

Spike came down holding what seemed to be a shield. Twilight looked at him and shook her head.

"Spike, what is this?" Twilight asked pointing at the shield.

"It's a shield." Spike answered.

"I know that! I mean what are you doing carrying it?"
"Oh... well we all know what happened the last time High Teck showed us one of his robots---" Spike saw Rarity and smiled, then then walked over, put his arm around her and held her close. "And besides, who's going to Protect you girls if his new robot goes Terminator on us?"
Rarity could barely contain her giggle and rolled her eyes. Twilight also giggled and sighed.
"Alright fine. I guess a 'little' protection wouldn't hurt."
All the girls giggled much to Spikes frustration. Twilight cleared her throat and walked towards the door. "Besides what's the worse that could happen?"
The three ponies and the dragon set off to the town center, there they encountered the rest of their friends, Applejack and Rainbow Dash waited for them at the front along with Pinkie Pie who was bouncing up and down almost like a foal before Holidays Hearth Celebration.
Twilight looked around for a moment and noticed someone she was not expecting to see at all.
"Princess Luna!" she exclaimed as she walked over and bowed to her.

"Twilight! How have thou been lately?" Luna asked she smiled brightly at Twilight.

"I'm doing quite well. What brings you to Ponyville today? Shouldn't you be, I don't know, sleeping getting ready for the raising of the moon? If you don't mind me asking of course?" Twilight asked trying hard not to offend her.
Luna giggled. "We are here because your princess wishes to see what thine friend High Teck has built as much as the rest of Ponyville. Thou could also say that, in case something does go wrong."

Twilight thought for a moment. What better protection is there then Princess Celestia's own sister? Surely she is just as powerful. Twilight thought. "Very well, would you like to stand next to us your majesty?"

"Oh we must refuse; your Princess must stay upon this stage. Again just in case." the Princess of the Night explained.

Again... Makes since. Twilight thought. "Um... Okay then your majesty."

Luna couldn't help but feel bad. She then suddenly smiled and wrapped her foreleg around her sister's Student. "Although, after the demonstration, if nothing goes wrong, Your Princess would LOVE for us to catch up with thine friends afterwards, yes?"
Twilight smiled and embraced the lunar princess and giggled. "Sorry, but yes we totally should meet up later. Sugar Cube Corner perhaps?"

Luna nodded, "It's okay twilight, and yes Sugar Cube Corner would be perfect!"
Twilight giggled and nodded. She walked back over to her friends and told them about the prearranged date with Princess Luna, they all agreed to go. Suddenly everypony was silenced as a horn blared to call everyone to attention. Everypony Ooohed and Awed when they saw High Teck walk up on stage. Twilight smiled as she finally got to see him clad in his Techno-saddle, inside the two pods on the sides were the best display of advanced robotics on Equestria. Ranging from robotic arms, tools, medical Equipment. And even a pair of shoulder mounted Plasma rifles for defensive purposes. She then looked down to his front right leg; strapped to the lower leg was a wrist computer. So advanced he couldn't allow Anypony to touch it without reading the owner's manual. Which of course Twilight herself was studying currently. And finally, on his head was an interface head set. Covering his right eye was a green lens that worked as a Heads-Up Display for his computer. Also adorn upon it where three buttons on its side to adjust the HUD's display settings as well as vision modes. High Teck used his mic on said headset to speak. His voice amplified by the nearby speakers so everypony can hear him properly.
"Ladies and Gentlecolts, When I was but a young Foul, I dreamt of an Equestria where Technology made lives for us Ponies safer and most of all easier. But fear not. We do not have to give up our long lasting traditions. Nyet! I merely wish to give your land Peace of mind." High Teck looked to Luna who smiled back at him and nodded. "With the recent assaults upon our fair town of Ponyville, ranging from the recent attack by Discord, as well as the ordeal with the Dragon attacking and stealing everything in sight."

Spike chuckled embarrassedly as Twilight and Rarity looked at him. Then High Teck Continued.

"Now, Please take heart that I am well aware of what happened the last time I released one of my drones in public. I have made many new strives and advancements to ensure complete safety with my creations."

"Ahem..."
High Teck looked over at Luna who was ushering him to 'get on with it' so to say. The Techno-Pony chuckled a bit and pressed a button on his computer controlling his personal airship to lower down from the cloud cover that loomed over the area. It lowered down an object with a tarp over it. It stood 15ft tall and judging by the way it stood upright it was no doubt bipedal. It appeared bulky however. Then again with the drape over it could just be how the shoulders where bit making it so wide like that. Twilight thought to herself.

"Now, without any further a due!" High Teck pressed another button which caused the machine under the drape to come alive. It seemed as though it was alive as it pulled the drape off itself and stepped forward.
Twilight looked at the marvel of robotic ingenuity. The machine was indeed bipedal. And indeed bulky. Although it moved with unusual grace due to its advanced articulation. It hard two arms, and two legs. Its head was round yet also wide with a big red optic in the center, upon its shoulders where authority lights. The left being Red and the right being blue in color. Its chest was Slightly V Shaped with two spot lights under the breast plates. On its right arm it possessed a three digit hand, the left arm however did not have a hand, but instead possessed a pipe. And the lower arm had an assorted amount of buttons and lights.
The Robot continued to walk several ponies panicked "hey!" "It's coming for us!" however the machine stopped and looked over upon the crowd. There it stood awaiting its next command.
"Ladies and Gentlecolts, I introduce to you, Homeland Security Drone model 209!" High Teck exclaimed, as if the machine had a proud ego, it stood proudly with its chest out as it gave a solute, to signify its allegiance towards Ponyville.
Many ponies giggled at its display of loyalty. Others it made it a bit easier to be calmer. Then Princess Luna walked up with her wings out to get everypony's attention.
"Citizens of Ponyville, your Princess has discussed to High Teck the usefulness of these security drones, and while we do indeed live in a peaceful land, it would be unwise of us not to accept such thoughtful gifts to Ponyville's as well as all of Equestria's Security!" Princess Luna stated using her royal Canterlot voice, although at this point, she was only using it so everypony can hear her properly.
"I am glad you feel that way your majesty. For already I have begun production of many more of these....." High Teck looked up at the sky with shock upon his face. "By the horn of Celestia....." He mumbled, however the mic was still on and his voice was still heard.
Everypony in the audience looked up at where High Teck was staring, everypony's jaw dropped. Including Princess Luna who, despite seeing quite a few anomalies herself was baffled by the site. Twilight Sparkle, Rainbow Dash, Applejack, Fluttershy, Pinkie Pie, Fluttershy, and Spike all bared witness to a huge fireball hurtling towards the town. Twilight looked at the course of the fireball. It was heading towards the stage alright. IT'S GOING TO HIT THE PRINCESS! Twilight realized she jumped up on stage and grabbed Princess Luna's Foreleg and pulled her off stage, High Teck noticed as well the danger to the Princess with the Fireball a few feet away from the stage he plunged himself to shove both Luna and Twilight off the sage out of the impact zone of the fireball.
The fireball smashes through the wood of the stage knocking the Security Drone off the platform and slamming hard onto the ground. Becoming buried under tons of Debris. Twilight shook her head and turned around to see High Teck helping her and Luna up with his robotic arms dispatched from his techno-Saddle.

"You girls alright?" High Teck asked.

"Yes, your Princess is okay. Though, I think we could use a bath later...." Luna stated pulling a twig out of her tiara and dusting the dirt off herself.

Twilight nodded when he looked at her. She turned around to see the rest of her friends run up to her.
"TWILIGHT!" Spike Called out
"Twi, are you okay, Darling?" Rarity asked
"We were so worried." said Fluttershy though quietly
"Ya'll ain't hurt are ya?" asked Applejack
"DID YOU SEE THAT!? THAT FIREBALL WAS ALL LIKE WHOOOOOOOOOSSHHHH! AND HT TOTALY SAVED YOU AND NOW YOU'RE LIKE DUUUUUUUUHHHHHH. BUT seriously are you okay?" Pinkie Pie Rambled.
"You Guys, let her talk. Are you okay?" Rainbow Dash asked while she hovered over the lavender unicorn.

Twilight Nodded by the barrage of questions. "Yeah. I'm fine. I'm just glad I didn't get BBQed by that fireball."

All the Ponies gathered around the impact site, a ring of fire prevented them from seeing was laid inside the crater. Suddenly a wave of neon purple light shot out causing many ponies to duck before the wave would hit them. Several ponies that did not move in time were knocked off their hooves. Twilight and her friends however were wise enough to duck in time. As the rose back up they saw a black figure behind the fire. A Pony.... a sickingly thin pony to be precise. Twilight noticed it had a horn on its head, it must be a Unicorn. The figure slowly walked through the fire many of the still conscious Ponies gasped and many screamed as they saw the Pony's body. Its body was clad with the armor similar to that of an insectoids Exoskeleton. Its chest was adorned with a harness with three crystal orbs. Two smaller crystal orbs on its sides, and one large one on the front. There were also three orbs on its shoulder blades that were sickingly exposed on her sides. They all glow the same neon purple as the shockwave did. Its irises where glowing neon violet as well. Its horn glowed as it finally spoke.
"BEHOLD! Your One True Master has come! Bow to me or be destroyed by my Infinite Power!" She spoke, the voice made it clear she was defiantly a female, a Mare pony. Her voice seemed to have an echo effect as she spoke. Giving her voice a tremble with a powerful voice.
Twilight however was awestruck at the Invader's appearance. She didn't want to say it though. However one of her friends finally broke the silence.

"S-she looks.... Just like you.... Twilight" Spike Shuddered. His mind trying to digest the information his eyes are giving him.
"B-B-But How!?" Twilight finally spoke. This caught her look-alike's attention. Twilight's only response was to gulp as the evil pony slowly towards her. Across the stage, down the steps. Each of her hoof steps where accompanied by Twilight's own heartbeats. It was like somepony took her own image and twisted it in such a way it made her look demonic and evil. As she walked closer Twilight could make out more of her Doppelganger's appearance.
Her form was no doubt almost skeletal. It looks like she hasn't eaten ever! But her presence showed she was no doubt powerful and strong enough to snap a fully grown dragon's neck with little effort. Her coat itself was deep dark red. A contrast to Twilight's own Lavender Coat. Twilight and her twisted clone circled each other, taking mental notes of their obvious differences moving her eyes up to the twisted pony's back, were jagged vertebrae spines. And down the back of her neck were scaled like armor plates. It was obvious this was indeed all her. Thing about her showed as though she was simply wearing it. It was all grafted upon her physiology.
Twilight continued to look at her twin. Her eyes made their way to her cutiemark. It was similar to hers. But noticeably different. Five small stars surrounding a Black hole. Twilight was about to change her view to her twin's eyes but something else caught her attention. She looked beyond her flank. And while one would expect to see a normal Pony's Tail, instead was a long serpentine tail. And at the end of her tail was three claws shaped translucent spines. Almost as if they were made out of the same crystal substance as the orbs on her chest harness and shoulder blades. Twilight then moved her eyes back up at her twin's horn. Instead of the usual horn that most Unicorns have, it was different then evens her own. It was long and looked much more like a sword. It was translucent and had a faint neon purple glow to it. This would light up brightly on occasion.
But it was her face and mane that scared Twilight to the core. Her muzzle was slightly longer and had an almost reptilian presence mixed in with the Equine appearance. The corners of her jaws had small crystal spikes although they were a lighter shade of red then her coat. She also had sharp pointed ears. Her mane was deep dark blue with red and violet streaks like Twilight's own mane had their Pink and purple streak highlights.
Twilight's ears perked up as her twin began to speak. Diverting her attention to her face.
"Well, hello there. Mother." She spoke

Twilight's ears went down as she shook her head. "I.... I don't have a daughter... I mean.... I haven't even met a stallion yet... ah..." Twilight's rational mind was having difficulty making her mouth work. She tried hard to respond like she normally would. But the current situation deemed it difficult as she plopped down to her haunches in a mix of horror, awe, and confusion.
"Oh don't worry, Dear mother. I'll explain it all to you." She sneered as she spoke. "Do you remember, after you turned on the Rocket's Computer Console, when you were pulling your foreleg back out of that small opening in one of the Rocket's Openings for its Landing struts, you cut your foreleg quite bad. So much so your blood dribbled out onto the inside panels for the Rocket's floor. Of course you were able to heal your cut, you forgot about that little puddle of blood you left behind."

Twilight thought back at this time High Teck was staring at her. "Twi, why didn't you tell me you cut yourself?"

"I was afraid if you saw me get hurt after doing something so simple you might have been forced to take you to the doctor and would have launched the rocket anyways. Then I would have missed it." Twilight explained. "You got to believe me, it's something I wanted to see all my life! I had no idea this would happen though!"

"Yeah I'm right here you know?" the Foreign Pony mumbled to herself.
"Oh Twilight.... I would have postponed it until we got you patched up." High Teck stated.
However their conversation was broken up as the new pony cleared her throat.
"As I was saying, after the rocket launched. The blood inside journeyed with it. The Rocket zoomed past the stars, beyond the moon. And was soon a witness to the creation of a newly formed black hole! The access energies where absorbed by your DNA and mutated allowing it to form a newly born filly. After breaking free from the rockets haul. I was sucked into the black whole and---

"And absorbed even more of the Black hole's access energies. Allowing you to grow larger and more powerful. Thus giving you the ability to survive the Vacuum of space, as well as the Black hole." Princess Luna finished realizing just what she is.

"Ah yes... hmm perhaps I misunderstood your intelligence qualities?" She stated with a sneer in her voice.

"So... you are really my daughter." Twilight said. Although in her current state it's doubtful she was mindful of what she was saying.
"Yes.... and from this moment forward. You are all to refer to me as.... SPACETWILIGHT SPARKLE!" she said announcing her name to the sky as the crystal orbs on her body started to glow. Causing more crystals to form out of the ground. Rising up in the air as they began to surround and orbit around Spacetwilight as well as the Mane 6, Luna, and High Teck. "Now, Bow down to your new Master! This world is MINE! AAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!"

End of Part 2
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Part 3: [link]

Spacetwilight Sparkle finaly makes her appearance! As well I got to hint some Romance between a High Teck and somepony else hehe. but who? I shall not tell!

anyways I hope you are enjoying this the best you can. I suck at writing. but this story just HAS TO BE WRITEN!

I am working to keep this story smut free. although it doesn't hurt to throw in a joke every now and again.

Now I just gotta draw Spacetwilight Sparkle!

Trivia

Descent of the God of Destruction was the title of the theme for the original Godzilla vs Spacegodzilla soundtrack. it was Spacegodzilla's theme.

this story takes place sometime around season 2. most likely after Secrete of My Excess.

The Crystals both on Spacetwilight's body as well as the ones she creates out of the ground is a Reference to Spacegodzilla's ability to create Crystaline structures. Spacegodzilla also has crystal spikes coming out of his body. Most notably his tail and shoulders.

yet again, Spacetwilight's origins are similar to Spacegodzilla's. although, while Spacetwilight's origins are evidential fact, Spacegodzilla's origins where theorized, but where both agreed upon that Godzilla cells where somehow sent into outerspace, sucked into a black hole, pushed out of a white hole, energized and mutated by the exposions of stars. Spacetwilight's Origins only differ slightly. and the inclusion of the White hole theory was ommitted.

Spike's comment about High Teck's 'Robot going Terminator on us' is a reference to the Terminator films in which, after coming online, the defence computer Skynet becomes scentient and turns on humanity and building machines to 'Terminate' the remaining human forces.

this is the second time Princess Luna makes an appearance in one of my fanfics. furthermore, she doesn't talk in Ye Old Equestian as much as she did in Luna Eclipsed. this is both due because I am not good at writing dialog in such old time languages. as well as I figured Luna has been practicing with her modern english. although its evident she is still working on it.

Ponies with serpentine tails are not unheardof in the fandom. although Spacetwilight's case, it is more of a mutation then any form of inter-species breeding or hybridism.

The Security drone mentioned in detail was ment to look like Shockwave from G1 Transformers. its model number 209 is a reference to the Enforcement Droid E.D. 209 from the Robocop series.

this is the first time in the story all six Elements of Harmony barers appear in the story.
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well I must say you got a good series going I'd love to read more and more of your stories! Yeah noticed a few movie references in it. yeah and in godzilla vs space Godzilla there were 2 theories one you mentioned and the other I forget it. you did a good job well written story and yeah I'd like to see space twilight sparkle as well because I could only picture parts here and there so a full drawing would help out on that